Saturday, September 17, 2005

4 lines

Come to me, please
Never stray from these familiar grounds
I would hold you to myself, always
For this selfish need to satisfy you


8/21/2005

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

OK :-D

Tunks said...

hahahahaha... sigh

Anonymous said...

Beautiful photos, it took me back to my own childhood. Every year my father would take us down for two weeks, to stay in a rented beachhouse.

Anonymous said...

"for this selfish need to satisfy you"

that is my favourite line of anything ever written on a blog...

i can't even tell you how much truth that holds...to me anyway.

good job.

Tunks said...

wow hs - I'm so touched that those words touched you :)

"i can't even tell you how much truth that holds...to me anyway."
^^
same here... same here. To me - I can't even explain.

Thanks for the comment.

Anonymous thanks for commenting.... I not sure exactly if u got the right blog tho :p... but thanks nondaless. Maybe it's mayarobeach.com

Anonymous said...

maybe annoymous saw images in ure words.. riteeee

Tunks said...

A mental image is possible yes - but we have d word 'photos' ... hmm.. Its a mystery

aka_lol said...

I think anonymous was looking at the Mayaro pictures @mayarobeach.com :)

We all have four lines inside of us just waiting for the right time to make their appearance. Your lines were perfected from genuine emotion. I always say the best poems or statements cannot be separated into lines but can only exist as a whole. Even though it's called 4 lines their true meaning exist as a whole :)

Very nice work as usual Tunks :)

Anonymous said...

i love this and the last line really is capturing